Guardian Dad
After my dad died of cancer, my family was relieved. He fought cancer for four years and we all knew that sooner or later he would leave us. After a month or so, we all continued our usual life even though it was not complete. I was in high school, and my older brother Richard was in college. His major was Architecture and he always devoted his time to drawing templates and reading books. He always asks me to help him draw grid lines and stuff, so we go to our living room and set his drawing materials up. After a few hours I fell asleep with my legs resting on the couch. Im half asleep by that time, because we all know that our house is not that of a normal typical house. I experience a cold breeze wrap around my body, and a heavy bag on my chest. I can't move my body and then my legs begin to float and drop from the back rest of the sofa. I saw a dark entity walking towards me and I can't move or speak, then something slapped me and moved my legs from the back rest of the sofa. I remembered smelling my Dad’s cologne around the living room. I suddenly woke up and asked my brother to check the house and explained to him what had happened. Then he smiled and told me that the front door is not locked and our dad woke me up to check it, he explained to me that he also experienced the same thing a few days ago. The black entity was not my dad because Richard already saw it before my dad passed away. My siblings saw a man in the kitchen looking for food. Richard experienced seeing the man floating in front of him. I also saw the man in our kitchen; at first glance I thought he was Richard. But when I yelled at him he just ignored me. It was dark, a little light from the backyard is helping me to see a little bit of something. Then the dark entity just walked towards the wall which shocked me. Our dad protected me from that entity, since then we no longer experience seeing that black entity. But that is not my last time...
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stella Jun 24, 2008
aw that is so sad! Im sorry
C3C! Jul 1, 2008
w0w dis is amazing
ShadowPeregrinus Jul 10, 2008
If that was not the last time... what happened afterward? Interesting story otherwise.
JFresh Jul 27, 2008
not a bad story. you even threw in a cliff hanger to leave the reader guessing the rest of the story